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I wanted to know how on Earth can I put all this information into complete sentences and paragraphs, it's really hard for me... I tried but it sounded so kindergarden.. can anyone help me? I would really appreciate it you's be life savers!!! <3 Here's the information: Nationality: African-American Born: 22/11/1942 Place He Was Born: Philadelphia/Pennsylvania Education: Graduated from Overbrook High school Family: Married, Linda Tull.... Two sons Honors: - Bachelor of science in aerospace engineering from Pennsylvania State University, 1964 - master of science in aerospace engineering from Air Force Institute of Technology, 1974 - Ph.D. in aerospace engineering from Air Force Institute of Technology, 1978 - master of business administration from the University of Houston, Clear Lake, 1987 - 11 honorary doctorate degrees from various universities Training: Guion Bluford entered the Astronaut Training Program, and became an astronaut in August 1979. Missions: Guion participated in 4 flight of space shuttle between the years of 1983 to 1992. Random: He was the second balck person to go up into space and the first African American. He is a retired astronaut. He has an elementary school named after him. Before he became an astronaut he was in the Air Force, where he served as a pilot during the Vietnam War and flew 144 combat missions. When he attended Overbrooks High he never got straight a’s but that certainly never stopped him.
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Guion Bluford was born on November 22nd, 1942 in Philadelphia, Pennsylvania. He is/was married to Linda Tull and has two sons. Guion never got straight A's in high school but still graduated from Overbrook High School and went on to be very successful in college. He earned a Bachelor's degree of science in aerospace engineering from the Air Force Institute of Technology in 1964. In the next ten years, he obtained his master's degree in aerospace engineering from the same institute. Four years later, he got a Ph. D. in aerospace engineering. He also has/ had 11 honorary doctorate degrees from other various universities and was/is the master of business administration from the University of Houston. After going to college, he went into the Air Force, where he served as a pilot during the Vietnam War and flew 144 combat missions. Then,Guion Bluford entered the Astronaut Training Program and became an astronaut in August of 1979. Guion participated in 4 space shuttle flights between the years of 1983 and 1992. He was also the 1st African- American to go into space, but is now a retired astronaut.


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Astronaut, Guion Bluford was born in Philadelphia/Pennsylvania on the 22 November 1942. Since graduating from Overbrook High School, the African-American received many honours including: a bachelor and master of Science and a Ph.D. in aerospace engineering and a master of business administration as well as 11 honorary doctorate degrees from various universities. Bluford entered the Astronaut Training Program and became an astronaut in August 1979 before becoming only the second black person in history to go up into space. He participated in 4 space shuttle flights between 1983 and 1992. Bluford married Linda Tull and had two sons. He is now retired and has honoured with an elementary school in his name.

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